This page went much smoother than the first, I had little corrections to the first draft.

I like the size of the panels I used in this one as they seem much more balanced to the page and because they are shorter and wider seem more like a storyboard or filmic?

The things I don't like too much about the page are the way the story flows, it jumps from one scene to another with little in-between and as a result feels a little disconnected from the pages narration as a whole.

Hey people! Check out the new Godman series called "Master and Apprentice". The adventure will continue every week so make sure you tune in!

Woop! I just got an interview for Plymouth uni for the illustration course! I need to get a portolio together!!

I shall Be colouring 's Dream Detective Redux and we will be self publishing the comic once coloured. If you're interested in getting your hands on a fine printed copy of this dreamy comic let me know! Make sure to check back to the pages as I will be uploading the finished versions shortly... enjoy!